Below is an essay that I wrote for English class. It is based (albeit loosely) on Virginia Woolf's Talland House, wherein she recounts memories of summers spent at a vacation house on the English coast.
The objective of the prompt was to employ the descriptive language and lengthy sentences used so often by Woolf. I apologize if the essay seems a little bit stilted or choppy -- I never got around to editing it -- but I hope you enjoy it nonetheless.
There’s a little town a few hours
east of here that lies just on the Canadian side of the border. It’s not much
in the way of a town, really; just a random smattering of imposing lakeside
hotels jumbled with ramshackle houses and convenience stores. Right next to the
main hotel was the Starlight Marina (much less romantic than it sounds) with
the typical Ski-Doo’s and speed boats and kayaks. Osoyoos is pretty much like
every other small lakeside town. But especially
when I was younger, it seemed an almost mystical place. The thing that struck
me most when I returned to a few years ago was that, even when it seemed that
everything and everyone had changed, this island of normalcy remained
unchanged. Five years after I visited it initially, there was the same hotel
that we always went to, same delicious restaurant, even the same ice cream
stand. It always seemed almost anticlimactic once we got there, but the drives
to Osoyoos were practically unbearable. My sister, older cousin, and I would
always go there after having spent two weeks visiting with our grandparents’
farm in the interior of British Columbia. Our parents would come for the last
few days on the farm, which was a rather tense experience. Even back then,
there was always a barely perceptible feeling of animosity, a buzz of cold electricity
that injected itself into every sentence and movement. It wasn’t that there was
one event that triggered this anxiety, so much as a series of small events that
made those few days a little choppy. We would pile into the car under the
stifling Okanogan sun, finally free from all the family drama. The car ride
seemed endless (six hours can feel like an eternity, especially when you’re
nine years old). But we amused ourselves for the arduous journey, knowing that
once we made it through, Osoyoos would be waiting for us, patiently as always.
As soon as we made it to the
hotel, we would leap out of the car, impatient to get to the beach as soon as
possible. Taking our bags out of the car and into the lobby seemed a Sisyphean
task with the wonderful sandy beach barely a hundred meters away. We waited
impatiently, shuffling from one foot to the other, unable to stand still when
our goal was within reachable distance.
And finally, freedom. The second
our parents gave the most miniscule nod, we took it as the go-ahead and raced
onto the beach- Through the dimly-lit lobby, down the slippery tiled stairs,
along the hallway wafting with chlorine from the pool, and onto the gray paved
balcony. We could finally see the beach in its full glory- everything from the chipped
bright orange paint on the metal hand rails to the dusty sand that went on
forever on either side of us. We leaped down the short set of stairs and onto
the warm sand. You could feel the sun-soaked grains covering your feet, each
individual granule seeming to soak the stress away. We would tentatively dip
our feet in the water, slowly wading up to our ankles, then our calves. Maybe
our knees if we were feeling brave. None of us really liked getting into the
water, and we would dare the bravest to dunk their head under the bracing water
first. Being the youngest by two years, I was almost never first. I would stand
alone at the shallowest bit of water, the ground coated with that same fine
sand that now glopped in between your toes like cafeteria pudding. I would get
up the nerve to go a little deeper in tortuously slow increments, wincing as
the cold water lapped at my ankles. My sister always believed that the best way
to get in was to dive all at once, and she tried to convert me by splashing me
with pails full of sandy water and slimy strings of kelp. But once everyone was
finally in the water, we would stay as long as possible. We would splash around until our bodies were
numb with cold, our skin pocked with goose-bumps. We stayed out until the sun
got hazy on the horizon, stretching out time until our parents finally called
us in for dinner.
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